Monday, December 4, 2017

Narrative Story

   Chapter one

It was another normal day in the village. Henry was traveling back home from school. When he  got home henry through his bag away and headed straight to his beloved park which was just a couple of blocks away. As soon as he arrived Henry went to the swings. He was getting higher and higher then he started to come down. When he hoped of the swings he saw a friend from school he was waving for him to come and talk to him.


“Henry mate what are you doing here all alone”, said zeke . Zeke was one of those friends who are always getting into trouble and somehow you were there at that moment and you end up in trouble as well. “I'm just playing, getting some fresh air, want to go on the swings with me ?” said henry. Even though Zeke didn't want to, he said yes because he had a plan. They both pushed of and used their technique to go higher, about ten minutes later they hoped of and that's when Henry suddenly felt drowzee and sat on the yellow coated bench and fell asleep.


It took him about 2 hours to wake up but when he did he was mad he was frustrated he didn't know where he was. “ Where am I !!!!!!”   Zeke told him to shut up before he wakes up jack smith. “Where the heck am I ?”  said henry, Zeke told him that he was in jack smith's yard. Now just shut up jack smith is the most  dangerous person in this village do you know that!! .  he has taken my mother's ring and if i don't get it back by tomorrow i'm not allowed to have a birthday party. “ So can you help me?” they eventually both agreed and went to it.


“Now the plan is to through stones on his roof get the ring and leave” said Zeke. henry was the distraction he was the one throwing stones on jacks roof. Oh yea Zeke knew where the ring was it was on his display wall. Hey who’s on my  roof  then Zeke quickly got the ring and  and they escaped safe. Zeke got to have his birthday party and Henry got excellent grades. And that's` only chapter 1.




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